Sunday, April 10, 2005

Part Two: Asleep

2. EXT. DIRT ROAD CALLED INDEPENDENCE AVENUE - CLOSE TO MIDNIGHT
RIKKI, YAEL, ELIANA, and DINA are all holding hands walking down barely-there road. They’re chatting, but it’s hard to tell what they’re saying. YAEL stops RIKKI in the middle of the road to lean on her so that she can get dirt out of her shoe.
The four girls finally make it to the house. They have been walking for close to thirty minutes close to the dead of the night, and are gracious to have arrived at their destination without any mishaps.
RIKKI tries the side door HOST and HOSTESS said they’d leave open. She can’t open it.
DINA
Uh...oh. Um, can I try?
DINA tries door. She can’t open it.
The four girls walk around to front door and knock on the door for a full five minutes until HOST opens door.
HOST
Couldn’t get in?
RIKKI
Apparently not--thanks! So, how do we get downstairs?
RIKKI, YAEL, ELANA, and DINA stand crowded in hall with HOST. They don’t know how to get downstairs because they entered through downstairs door when they came earlier.
Five seconds later--
DINA
‘Scuse me, how do we get down--
DINA turns to see HOST asleep. Standing completely asleep. YAEL and ELANA are too tired to even notice and RIKKI is passing out from laughter. DINA can’t control laughing, too.
Another ten seconds later--
HOST
You need to know where to go.
HOST shows girls to the stairs.

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